When Becky Knapp came to visit again, she told us to assess each others scripts. We all had a look at everyone's scripts, and we had to give critical feedback on how they could be improved. Becky also had the chance to look at our scripts and gave feedback.
This feedback gave us the appropriate information to start improving our scripts even further.
My version of my script:
The general feedback I recieved was positive, my peers said they enjoyed my script, but was confused as to what genre it was. The format of the script was wrong, it was in the wrong font and I didn't have a front page cover for it.
When Becky talked to me about my script, she said there was some genre confusion, between comedy and drama. For a short film, she said it would be wise not to have the both, as we don't have enough time for character and plot development in the space of 5 minutes.
After this, we decided to work on Jenna's script, as her's was easier and more developed, so we could produce a better short film in the time we have.
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